George, Duke of Clarence "Clarence" |
THE PASSAGE IS A DIALOGUE. Clarence is in a conversation with his Keeper (jailer) and recounts a dream he has just had to him. Shakespeare contrasts this Act I scene with a parallel scene in Act V where Richard is seen to grapple with his conscience after also having a dream. We are asked to compare Richard’s introspection with Clarence’s.
Stylistically, the language Shakespeare uses provides a focus for characterization and theme presentation. For example, as a dialogue, the comments by Brackenbury and the Keeper are decidedly sympathetic. The audience is directed to be sympathetic toward Clarence. The Keeper asks Clarence if he was in “sore agony”. He asks specifics about his dream. This contrasts with Ratcliffe who, when King Richard awakes from his Act V dream, asks no questions at all. Instead, he directs Richard to ignore his dream and get on with the business of fighting the morning’s battle. Clearly, in Clarence’s scene, questions are used to indicate relationship and express concern, as well as ask for clarification (about his dream), and it is probable that the audience would respond in a manner similar to Brackenbury and the Keeper.
The imagery used also reflects Clarence’s internal processes, and I should restate that Clarence’s dream is a reflection, a dramatic presentation more accurately, of the workings of conscience, specifically a Christian conscience. There are images of drowning: Clarence’s dream has him knocked overboard a ship (captained by Richard, of course) where he is trapped underwater. The physical length of the opening line from this passage leaves the audience breathless: it runs a full six lines before a final stop. Such line structure provides the audience with the sense of breathlessness and entrapment that Clarence experiences in his dream. In his dream, he says he felt his soul was trapped in the “panting bulk” of his body; and that his “ghost” cannot rise to heaven, to the “empty, vast and wand’ring air”. Instead, it remains underwater. Why? It is because Clarence faces a crisis of conscience; and the imagery Shakespeare uses to depict his sense of entrapment underscores this crisis. Words such as “envious” flood, “stopped-in”, and “smothered”; as well, night is “perpetual”, never ending and unchanging.
Tower of London |
Lawrence Olivier as "King Richard III" |
The use of imagery of entrapment, metrical dislocation, alliteration, line length and Classical-Christian motifs provide the audience with a depiction of the growth of a Christian conscience; or in Richard’s case, the opposite. Richard’s refusal to accept the fact of conscience, even in the actions of supernatural powers, shows, in the play’s entirety, the crisis that results for a nation whose king lacks a conscience.
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Meter: "In all sustained spoken English we feel a rhythm, that is a recognizable through variable pattern in the beat of the stresses in the stream of sound." (Glossary)
Iambic Pentemeter: a light stress followed by a stressed syllable with five (penta) "feet" which are pairs of stressed and unstressed syllables per line. SOP for Shakespeare and many english-speaking Renaissance writers.
Works Cited
Shakespeare, William. "Love's Labours" Lost in The Riverside Shakespeare. Ed. G.B. Evans. NY: Houghton Mifflin, 1974.
Abrams, M.H. A Glossary of Literary Terms, 5th ed. Fort Worth, Chicago: Holt, Rinehart and Winston, Inc., 1988.
Prof Comments: Very good; perceptive, careful, and interesting to read. I'm very happy with your work in the course, and I'd encourage you to take the paper option for this term's work, although the choice is of course up to you. I'll be distributing suggestions for topics in a week or so. GRADE=A
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